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what is CSR?

내답변

csr aims make a postiive impact while engaging in business. There are triple button criteria. 'people, planet, cost'. people deals with how companies threat their employees. planet deals with practices of sustaining the environmental as a company operates. the reason of campanies doing these, some social advocacy say that companies can get economical property and brand differentiation in the way of csr.

GPT

CSR aims to make a positive impact while engaging in business. It's guided by the triple bottom line criteria: people, planet, and profit. The "people" aspect involves how companies treat their employees, while "planet" concerns sustainable environmental practices as companies operate. The rationale behind these actions, according to some social advocates, is that companies can gain economic benefits and brand differentiation through CSR efforts.

• "csr aims make a postiive impact" should be "CSR aims to make a positive impact."
• "button" should be "bottom."
• "criteria" should be "criterion" since "criteria" is the plural form.
• "how companies threat their employees" should be "how companies treat their employees."
• "practices of sustaining the environmental as a company operates" should be "practices of sustaining the environment as a company operates."
• "the reason of campanies doing these" should be "the reason companies do this."
• "some social advocacy say" should be "some social advocates say."
• "companies can get economical property" should be "companies can gain economic benefits."
• "in the way of csr" should be "through CSR."

 

 

 

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