오늘 오픽 6/14 with gpt

In the survey you said that you are in school right now. Tell me what courses you are taking this semester.

 

내대답

if i take a course this semester. i would like to take a physics, biology and philanthropy.because i think that that sicence classes are even more harder than hisotry. that would will be more helpful to future career or decision of industry. so i will be learning about the basis of science like resome or how the nature can be constructed in this semester.

 

 

gpt

If I take courses this semester, I'd like to take physics, biology, and philanthropy. I think science classes are more challenging than history, but they will be more helpful for my future career or industry decisions. This semester, I want to learn the basics of science, such as research methods and understanding how nature works.

문법

크게 두드러지는 문법적인 오류는 없지만, 약간의 표현 수정으로 더 자연스러운 문장이 됩니다. 예를 들어, "take a course" 대신 "take courses"로 변경하여 여러 과목을 듣고 싶다는 의도를 분명히 하고, "like" 대신 "such as"를 사용하여 예시를 제시하는 방식이 더 적절합니다.